Line cross cast three outside a pole fishing the sky bright

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-- A brief comment on Mei Li's poetry


Jilin Hongyu
 

 

    Who is Merry?You may not know。But if you say "Selected Journal of Chinese Poetry", you must be no stranger。In recent years, the publication has had a growing influence in the poetry world。Her editor in chief, that's Merry。Merry's real name is Xi Lixin, is a city personnel director, also counted among the officials。Here we ignore his work and speak only of his poetry。

    Merry's poetry is not carved, clear water hibiscus, has a distinct sense of The Times and the consciousness of sharing music with the people, with rhyme advancing with The Times, fresh and natural style。


The deep sleeping butterfly still cannot shake awake, and new buds are forming among the branches。
Pagoda flowers in the middle of the night east wind dance, a few bees have gone early。


    The song "Accidental Sense" is short, but the meaning is profound。One could not wake up, the other had already left early, invisibly accused the butterfly of laziness, praised the bee of diligence, through the literal, the imagination of the space to expand beyond the poem, we seem to see the author "there is no poetry outside the poem" the real meaning。Poetry, not only to temper the skills of words, but also to have a reasonable creation of the kung fu, what is more valuable is to clarify a philosophy, let people feel from it, I am afraid that this is the ultimate meaning of poetry。

    What is poetry??Life is poetry。Only when you walk into life, go deep into life, and refine life, can you get the favor of life and gain something。


Chrysanthemum fragrance everywhere dyed rich years, Xiaoqu light hum mountains。
Neighbors meet channel congratulations, a car drunk between autumn。


    A good poem depends first of all on the idea。The so-called Bai Juyi "on behalf of the people" meaning is also。Intention is the soul of poetry, but also the soul of all literary works, without intention, no matter how good language is pale。The song "Rich Years", through the chrysanthemums, songs these objects led to the neighborhood congratulatory situation, so as to achieve "a car drunk between autumn" such artistic conception。Simple and unpretentious, telling, giving people a kind of immersive moving。It's like a cutout of a beautiful graffiti, or a moving close-up camera frame。

    Merry tried to explore the poem from all levels and different angles, and boldly integrated the thinking and language of the new poem into it。Take a look at this song "Exhibition Fishing" :


Far mountain giri color near mountain roses, wild boat into Cuiwei。
The red line is thrown out of the three boundaries, and a pole catches the sky。


    This is a small fishing by the lake, but the red line is thrown out of the three boundaries, there is no fish, but a pole to the beautiful sky, through such novel techniques and morphemes more subtly the poet sitting fishing the lake time concept to the metaphor out, unconsciously the day is bright, how comfortable, how soft。

    The valuable thing of Merry is that his works have something to say, and there are few works without complaining, which is exactly such a creative attitude that is lacking in the contemporary poetry world。Love, playing with words, has become a common disease difficult to cure。Merry's creative path is obviously correct, only pay attention to current events, record current events, can be worthy of The Times, also worthy of the poet this sacred title。


Read Sanxiang full eye spring, smoke everywhere shake the spirit。
Human male ten color, all with the Zhang family accounted for nine points。


    This "Zhangjiajie Aria" adopts the method of discussion into poetry since the Song Dynasty,Replace scenery with emotion,Scenery is in love,It emphatically expresses the author's feeling of reading things,The reader is presented with a finished view of the resort,"Nine points for the Chang family.",Suddenly put Zhangjiajie heroic beauty to highlight out,I don't want you to doubt it。

    With the identity and status of Merry, generally speaking, it should be living in an atmosphere of prosperity, singing and dancing, fighting for fame and profit, and at all costs for the interests of power。But he had a sense of relief。


Far see pear flower near wine village, castle peak everywhere enchanting。
This life like to be a casual traveler, tomorrow riding a donkey into the sword door。


    From this song "Troubadours" can clearly see that the author is clean, not bound by fame and wealth, far away from the mud and muddy water of officialdom, the pursuit of indifferent and quiet attitude。The first sentence to write pear flower near wine village, a metaphor for the fragrance of wine incomparable;The bearing sentence is written all over the mountain to see the strong aroma of wine and drunk, do not write people drunk, write the mountain ecstasy, played a blunt and more clear effect。And in the face of such a beautiful peach garden, what else can you think?What are you arguing about?Instead of being able to change the wind under the sun by oneself, it is better to learn from the sages to devote themselves to the landscape and be a carefree guest。Needless to say, this poem obviously has a negative attitude towards life, but compared with those who are bent on obtaining and venal, it is already valuable。

    Merry is not interesting at any time, with a different personality, he often makes his own independent analysis and judgment on what he sees based on his life experience and experience。This is the case in Persuading Meng Jiang。


The Great Wall builds vicissitudes of life, traversing China as the backbone。
Aspiring men when the country, Meng Jiang why complain Qin emperor。


    This poem broke the past mention of Meng Jiangnv on the Qin Shi Huang such a habit of thinking, but to stand in the height of history to write, protect the family and defend the country, heaven is just, the rise and fall of the world, every man has the responsibility to die for the country, although death is still glorious。A poet must first of all be an individual, a real man, and patriotism is his yardstick。Countless people with lofty ideals, and even every Chinese of us have one thing in common, that is, love for the motherland, and this poem of Meili fully reflects his patriotic feelings of worry about the world。

    Merry's poems, easy to make quite a lot, limited to space, only for a glimpse。One's own opinion is shared by all。

 

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